Many people believe that having alot of money is the greatest happiness in life. But I don't agree with them,because money is not everything. Money can't make us a true man.

很多人认为拥有很多钱是人生最大的幸福。但我不同意他们的想法，因为钱不是一切。金钱不能使我们成为一个真正的男人。

The way I see it, good health is much better than a lot of wealth. No matter how much money we have, we'll not feel happy at all if we are in poor health. In order to be healthy, we must keep a positive attitude and have a good living habit.

在我看来，健康比财富更重要。如果不健康，不管有多少钱，我们都不会快乐。为了保持健康，我们必须要保持积极的态度，形成良好的生活习惯。

Apart from good health, we must be diligent at work. As long as we work hard, we cannot just make a good living, but enrich our minds.

除了良好的健康，我们必须勤奋工作。只要我们努力工作，我们不仅可以过上好生活，而且还可以丰富思想。

Additionally, we ought to give our helpful hands to others when they are in need. While helping others, we can own a good fame as well as get more social experience. It's really a good wayto kill two birds with one stone. Only by doing so can we enjoy the happiest life.

此外，我们应该在别人需要帮助的时候帮助别人。在帮助他人的同时，我们可以拥有一个好名声，并获得更多的社会经验。这真是一举两得的好方法。只有这样我们才能享受幸福的生活。

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